Senin, 22 September 2014

To be your friend
Hai, friend…welcome in my blog again. Now I post a short conversation about introducing somebody to someone else. Maybe in grammar, or about story have uncorrect, you can correct it in comment. Or maybe you have suggestion, it’s so make feel happy..Now let’s raed it…J
Illustration :
Now is time break so Fia to go to the canteen to buy some bread and a cup guava juice. When she walking in the front of garden, there is a boy call him. He is Gandra, Fia’s old friend, but  they are in the same university right now, although in different majoring.
Gandra        : “HI, Fia..!”
Fia               : “oh hi, Gandra..”
Gandra        : “How are you?”
Fia               : “I’m very well thank you. How about you? Long time no see? Oh..maybe you have many assignment so you are so very buasy. Is that right?”
Gandra        : “Haha…I’m fine. Yeah, as you know I have many assignment. If I have time break, a few time I spend to eat, after it I also finish my assignment. Maybe you want to help me?
Fia               : “haha,sorry friend. I want it if I can, but you know we are in the different majoring so I don’t know all about your assignment.”
Gandra        : “Fia, I just kidding. All my assignment is also my responbility. By the way, where you will go?”
Fia               : “I will go to the canteen. And how do doing in the garden?”
Gandra        : “as you look, I use wi-fi connection to search artikel and some material for presentation in Friday.”
Fia               : “oh I see..sorry Ndra, I must go to the canteen now. Next time maybe we can sharing about our majoring.”
Gandra        : “ okay, maybe you want to buy some bread for me, it can make so thanksfull..haaha..
just kidding Fia. Okay, see you next time.”
Fia               : “see you too…bye..”
After Fia blether with Gandra, she go to the canteen. Suddenly Ainul come to Gandra.
Ainul           : “Hi,Gandra. I look last minute you blether with a girl. Her face is sweet you know. Who is she? Ooo…she is your girlfriend? How pity sweet girl have an ugly boy like you..hahahaha…”
Gandra        : “Hey,of earlier you stay near from here and you look our blether?!”
Ainul           : “I am sorry. I just want to know about sweet girl”
Gandra        : “As you know she is not my girlfriend,but she is my old friend when in the senior high school.
Hah, you say that she have sweet face..?sweet girl…Oh God. You like her?”
Ainul           : “I just want to be friend with her. Please you can help me to introducing me to her?”
Gandra        : “ehm…let me think…”
Ainul                     : “please, I believe you are
Gandra        : “okay..okay after she from canteen, I will call her and introduce you to her”
Ainul           : “yeah, I know you are really good friend”
After that Gandra see Fia, and he call her..
Gandra        : “Hi,Fia…wait for me in there.!”
Fia               : “Ohh..yes..”
Gandra        : “Hi, Fia..”
Fia               : “Hi, Gandra…what happen?”
Gandra        : “Hehe..”
Fia               : “Wait..wait…who is he?”
Gandra        : “Oh..It is why I call you…He is my friend. He want to be your friend”
Fia               : “Oh..why not”
Gandra        : “Fia, this is my friend, his name is Ainul. “
Ainul           : “Nice to meet you Fia. Sorry maybe I disturb you. I just want to be your friend”
Fia               : “It’s okay..no problem. Nice to meet you too. Ehm…sorry I must back go to the class. 15 again my class begin. Maybe someday we can blether again”
Ainul           : “It’s be better if I have your phone number”
Gandra        : “Please think again Fia before you give your phone number. Haha…”
Ainul           : “Please, Fia”
Fia               : “okay, my phone number is 085231114046”
Ainul           : “Thank you so much Fia..”
Fia               : “It’s okay..bye Gandra and see you next time Ainul”
Ainul           : “See you…
Oh Bro, you really my best friend”
Gandra        : “yah..yah..yah…I know what do you want. Now let’s back to go to the class”



6 komentar:

  1. oh my god, forget this homework though :(
    btw, just correcting, gandra's third dialogue should be "after that" not "after it"
    so glad if you revise my conversation, thank you :))

    BalasHapus
  2. novi, i have a correction In fia's second line you have a typo "... so you are so very buasy. Is that right?” .. "buasy" should be "busy". and if you delete the second "SO" in the sentence it must be better.
    and granda's last line "…I know what do you want" i think it's better if you delete word "DO" ..
    but afterall it's nice story...
    keep writing Nov ^^

    BalasHapus
  3. may be you can revise at the sentence "Now is time break so Fia to go to the canteen..,.". not "time break" but "break time", and you can delete "to" after word "Fia" ai that sentence. thank you ^-^

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. Atagfirulloh...haha before I'm upload, I ever remember that's false,but I'm forget, not revise it first...:D
      thank you so much...:)

      Hapus